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[zamatamagotchi]

Little Dream the Ura Young Memetchi was sad and lonely.It was her first day of school.No one would play with her.Leela and Any said she was a dreamer who they could not even stand around.This made Dream cry.She was heading to the door when she saw a girl who looked just like her.Wings in all.Dream ran up to the girl and asked,"What is your name?"
The girl replied."Dream."
Dream said,"Me to!"
From that day the Dreams were best friends.

What did you think of my story so far??


[edit: removed formatting -kat]

[Elana]

First of all, I couldn't read it because of the colours you chose. It just looked like long purple bars with nothing written on them.

Secondly, I don't think stories belong in General Discussion. They go in the Play-By-Post section somehow.

I'd like to read your story once these issues are fixed!