Thanks for the comments everyone, I wanted to wait until I was finished with this story before I acknowledged them but I very much appreciate them.
Before I started this I wanted to write it like a story but still include what was going with my ocean, up until the last post I really hadn't done that, but I'm very happy with how it all turned out. I hope everyone that read it enjoyed it, even though it was practically a short book.
As for the nightmare part. Sorry about that. The day before Otototchi changed I actually had a nightmare so I figured I should include that in the story.